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Laughter by ~Gilrandir-Adrea:iconGilrandir-Adrea:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I wander freely
Through oaks and maples,
Far from comfort and warmth.
Sadness surrounds me like a winter cloak,
as I travel towards a simple grave.
I stop in front of the tombstone,
gaze heavy as a boulder.
Suddenly a change occurs, a new wind blows
The aura surrounding me isn't so bleak
As I gaze below, a slight smile is seen,
and as I return back, a flash of pink is seen,
as a sakura blossom floats down gently,
and a hint of laughter travels behind me
To land on a final resting place.
©2007-2009 ~Gilrandir-Adrea
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This is something I found from a while back, and added a bit to it.

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~ElairaHunter Aug 23, 2007, 11:39:38 AM
Nice poem. I'd suggest splitting it into two stanzas at 'Suddenly' since a change occurs.

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~Gilrandir-Adrea Aug 23, 2007, 1:40:25 PM
hmmm....maybe.....*thinks* i dunno

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~troubledXdaydreams Aug 23, 2007, 4:50:55 PM
I like how it isn't dark and depressing.

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~Gilrandir-Adrea Aug 23, 2007, 5:52:07 PM
Thank you :D

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~troubledXdaydreams Aug 24, 2007, 8:38:22 PM
welcome

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~cryingpain Aug 28, 2007, 10:59:33 PM
Lovely imagery :D

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~Gilrandir-Adrea Aug 29, 2007, 4:19:03 AM
Thank you! =D

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~willow09 Sep 4, 2007, 4:02:42 AM
I love this. So short yet it gets its message right through.

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~Gilrandir-Adrea Sep 4, 2007, 4:08:13 AM
Thank you!

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